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Truth Vision Unleashed on Circadian Circle

circadianCircadian Circle by Alesha L. Escobar
The 3rd Book in The Gray Tower trilogy

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Note: This, along with the other two books of this trilogy, was given in exchange for an honest review.

Greetings!  The Review Board is here to discuss Circadian Circle by Alesha L. Escobar, the final book in The Gray Tower Trilogy.

First with her thoughts, Mini Truth.

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This will probably be the quickest review I’ve done for TRB (or on my own) to date.

I was disenchanted with this trilogy as a whole. From the first book I found way too many things that I felt were not kosher with the series.

First, I must say this; I am a lover of fantasy fiction, and I realize that in books of fantasy fiction the truth must be stretched to make way for the fictional aspect of the story. However, the trick to a good fictional story is to make it believable, and I felt that the Gray Tower Trilogy failed in that aspect. This is a grand shame because the elements of the series could’ve made for an outstanding trio. Yet, the lackluster articulation made this collection highly unattractive to me.

Following are the elements that I did not like about Circadian Circle:

  • Still I did not take a liking to the character of Isabella. I still felt that she was obnoxious and temperamental, as well as immature. One would’ve expected there to be some sort of maturity in the character considering that this was the third part of the series, but there wasn’t.
  • I cannot believe that she got over the loss of Ken so quickly. That bothered me quite a lot.
  • There was way too much additional dialogue and narrative in this book which made it twice as long as it needed to be. It was way too wordy and I felt as though the majority of it was there just to elongate the story, and for no other reason and truthfully had no place in the book.
  • The beginning of the story starts just like the first book is the series, full of action but lacking true reason. Then the story drops in action and becomes boring… again.
  • There is tons of magic, demons and things of the sort–it kind of felt like an episode of Charmed at times–but I feel that as a whole, the handling of these elements were mediocre.
  • Another thing that bothers me is that throughout the series we find a ‘set in stone’ implementation of ‘rules’ as it pertains to magic and the otherworldly being, however time and time again, it seemed as if those rules did not apply to Isabella the MC. Basically, I kept feeling like these laws were broken just to get Isabella out of trouble. That bothers me. Because a rule is a rule for a reason. It cannot be broken, not even by the MC.
  • The ending, to me, was unbelievable and anticlimactic. As the matter of fact, I had to read it twice and still I didn’t get the full gist of it. I was fully frustrated.

As a whole, I’d like to reiterate that I was not impressed with this story, or the trilogy for that matter, and was very let down… AGAIN.

Unfortunately, because I’d hoped that this book would make up for the shortcomings of the rest, yet didn’t, my rating for this one is even lower than the others.

I’m sorry, but the Gray Tower Trilogy was just not what I expected it to be at all.

Truth says… 3 TRB Stars.

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Now let’s discover what Nikki sees in the story.

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Okay, so in the third book of this trilogy, Isabella has to crank up her powers and learn how to harness them to save the world, whilst holding on to her humanity in order to finally defeat the evil Octavian. In order for Isabelle to complete her mission though, she is forced to make a deal with a demon that puts her relationship with her friends and allies into question. When the Cruenti Master kidnaps her beloved family, she must do all in her power to save them.

But, I knew that she would, and that was the problem for me, the element of danger just wasn’t there because the previous books have her doing much the same thing. I liked the twist when her father and mentor, hatch a scary alternative plan should her Drifter abilities fail. I won’t say what it is, because that would spoil it for future readers.

Again the opening is exciting and Isabelle has to do a spot of magic to get herself and her companions out of another life threatening situation. I really didn’t want to read any more of the same old stuff, and although there are some newish adversaries, the action and terror, was similar to the previous books. I’m not sure what else I can say that I haven’t said before, but here goes. There are lots of magical stuff and creatures such as demons, warlocks, evil wolves, telekinesis, mind reading, a living statue, tarot stuff and so on, then – enter a dragon. Phew, with so much going on, can there be any room left for a story line? I mean, a different-ish one? Not really.

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After the opening action, more long sections of plot recap and exposition. I wanted something different to keep me interested in the story and not scream at the page, “Get on with it!” There still isn’t much of a Nazi WW2 storyline. They do come in and out of the plot here and there, but there wasn’t enough actual historical detail for me. I think it could do with some cutting down and sharpening of content to make it less similar to the first two books.

On a more positive note, there were a lot of good action sequences that were quite well paced and full of tension. Most of the characters are well defined, but again I would have preferred a few less so that I could focus on the main protagonists and learn more about them. Hence the reason I haven’t singled any one out in particular to talk about. Isabella’s character began to irritate me after a while. She came across a little whiny in this third outing and I didn’t really believe in her vulnerability, or her emotional concern for her family enough to make her actions totally convincing.

I found some of the descriptions too wordy and almost like stage directions, and I became bored with so many of them. Again wanting Alesha to get on with the story and not have to read in minutia exactly how A gets to B physically. It left nothing to the imagination.

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There was an awful lot of eating going on too. However, Escobar does have a good narrative style on occasions that really comes alive when she gets into the action sections. This is largely due to the short sentences construction and chapter lengths.

Vision Verdict: 5 TRB Stars

The ending was a little flat for me since the previous action was quite thrilling. Also, I’m not sure if the ending is a conclusion, or just a break until the next time. I don’t think that I would care to read another instalment if the plot remains the same. However, lovers of urban fantasy and magic may enjoy this book and its over-complicated storyline.

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Now, thoughts from the Unleashed One.

Unleashed Speaks

I know you guys are probably wondering why I’ve put in what appears to be a musical commercial break speaking of an emotional roller coaster.  It is because that is the best way to describe what this book (as well as the other two in The Gray Tower Trilogy) has taken me on.

Before I dig all these feelings out of the deepest darkest corners of my being, let me share what brought out some snapshots of happy.

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Happy Happy, Joy Joy (Pros)

1. Syntax stayed the course.  There were very few mistakes to be seen in the .mobi copy I had for review.

2. Abstract covers remained in unity for the presentation of the trilogy.

3. There were actually a few characters that I got a chance to know, amidst all of the narrative, dialogue and action.  One character I liked from the start was Gregory, despite him being distrusted by everyone.  Another character I found enticing was Ammon.  Yes, I know it is strange because he is the one the reader is supposed to hate, yet there was something cunning in the fact that he seemed always one step ahead.  Finally, there’s Nikon: the more I discovered about her, the more I admired her “this is how I am, no apologies”.  There is this resolve and tenacity in her that garnered my respect.

4. Although the author (upon initial reach out) stated that these works couldn’t actually stand alone, for me they actually could.  This is a plus to the reader who wants to read something without being lost, or to one who has read one book and opts not to continue with the rest of the books.  In other words, one doesn’t feel as if he has to finish the whole thing.  There is enough back tracking to fill in the gaps, even if you were to start with this book or with book two (Dark Rift), as opposed to book one (Tower’s Alchemist).

5. The author has a great way of describing the setting prior to some of the action sequences.

6. There was a better balance in chapter lengths.

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Okay, happy feeling dissipating.  Time to grab some a tall glass, put in a circle of Tropical Punch Kool-Aid and blend it with the slight powder known as sugar.  Maybe that will help me.

In The Tower’s Alchemist, I relied on spells.  In Dark Rift, I relied on circles.  In this rendition of written opportunities, I have decided to create some rifts.

The Dark Rifts (Cons)

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1. Rift of “Where in the Land of Oz Am I?”
In Circadian Circle, I was trying to figure out the time line.  Was it in fact still World War II? The setting wasn’t as prominent this time around.  If one was following the trilogy, there are certain events that happened in its predecessor that makes you wonder how current events could be taking place.  One is the connection between Isabella and Brande after a tragedy strikes with someone else she was close to.  Some form of time stamping would have helped developing side stories make sense.

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2. Rift of “In My (fill in the blanks) Accent”
Okay, should I put on my professional on-the-phone accent or my hanging out with the girls accent?  I admit, this is an Unleashed quirk but the reason I bring it up was because the repetition of this got me irked.  For example, one of the Master wizards Ekuweme, from my understanding, is Nigerian.  Why would it have to be emphasized that he’s speaking in a “Nigerian accent”?  Even if he isn’t, and he is someone who learned Nigerian as a language, it would just make more sense to speak Nigerian, as opposed to “in my ______ accent”.  The same thing was done with another wizard Cathana, giving great weight to her “Irish accent”. What does bringing spotlight to these accents have to do with the story, and why with just these two individuals and none of the others?  What in the name of Accent, Sazón, and Adobo is going on here?

3. Rift of “Sticky Situations TIVO”
Have you ever looked at a show and thought, “Hey they used that same trick three seasons ago!”, or wanted to look at a new episode of a program, only to discover that you’re watching a rerun?  That is the best way to discover the crisis cycle that is Isabella.  Here is the overall summary using my own made up actors:

Waver of Red Flag: He is mighty dangerous.
Fool Who Rushes In: I got this. All I need are my circles, my fires, my red lipstick, and the stuff that makes the most vicious villains go to sleep right between my cleavage.
(Fool realizes that she’s way in over her head too late.  Fades to black to wake up roughed up and tied up.  Trash talking with villain ensues.  Special fire and circle powers activate and just when Fool is at her weakest the cavalry, including Waver of Red Flag, saves the day in the nick of time.)

A few chapters later… wait, this again! No, trust me… the Zaman’s Fire is next.  Oh, there it goes!  Yes, the Circle (the Protection one) will arrive shortly.  Boom, there it is!

Unleashed, you don’t mean to tell me there will be a sneak attack.  Oh, my God, where did that thing come from?  A team of help?  Say it isn’t so; Unleashed, it’s like you’re a psychic!

Um, no, just that it happened in the other two books, and multiple times in this one.  It almost makes the conflict seem not that impressive.

Moving on.

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4. Rift of “Wait, did this turn into a comedy book?”
Circadian Circle
has been deemed fantasy fiction, action adventure, and/or even a mashup.  Who knew that it was a comedy book too?  Wait, I wasn’t supposed to be laughing, was I?  Well, let’s think.  There’s a heroine that the reader is supposed to get behind that uses her temper more than her brain to make decisions, then thinks she is getting over on the bad guys but playing right into their hands.

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On top of that, the dialogue Isabella has back and forth between people makes me shake my head in confusion and disdain.  Plus, she is supposed to have over the top powers but instead of being trained earlier in this book (hell, even the last book), Isabella wants to get down to business without reading the instruction manual on how to do things properly but behaves like a brat when things don’t go her way.

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If this isn’t Magic Bloopers 101, I don’t know what is.  This could also be called I Can Do Bad All By Myself (the Drifter edition), and even Stealthless, because most of Isabella’s “spy activity” result in epic fails.

5. Rift of “‘m Just Not that Into You”

Isabella, Isabella, Isabella!  So many high hopes.  At first, I was just saddened by your lack of spy swagger (1st book), then disappointed in your lack of opportunity to engage with your emotions (2nd book).  This right here is just stupidity.

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Yes, Isabella may be the high and mighty Drifter but her overall disposition didn’t grow with her powers.  Her stubbornness and inability to really adapt hindsight and truly blossom caused me to disengage from her story.  It’s hard for me to get behind three long books worth of a person who is the main focus if the progress is lackluster or nonexistent.  I’m not saying a hero doesn’t make mistakes but the greatest of heroes uses unfortunate circumstances to not only persevere but flourish into a better person and not meet those pitfalls again.  You don’t continue to make errors; you go outside yourself and think of the whole as opposed to your own selfish needs and wants.  That’s the meaning of sacrifice and it doesn’t always make one popular.  I found Isabella to care way too much about popularity and wanting to cheat her way to being powerful rather than learning to be accountable, responsible, and diligent in her resolve.  As my grandma would say, “She’s running around like a chicken with her head cut off.”

6.  Rift of “What is THAT doing there?”
Brande and Isabella, oh so adorable!  How did we get here?  That goes back to that 1st rift I mentioned.  How was there time to develop a love story among the Wolves, the Black Dragon, Ammon, saving people, developing maximized Drifter powers and Octavian?  The narration of it all was put together in a nice little “matter-of-fact” package.

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7. Rift of “Are You Serious?”
All I have to say is that the ending didn’t match the intensity of the action at all.  Even now, I still sit here stunned.

Unleashed Verdict: 5.5 out of 10 TRB Stars

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Now on to do some final thoughts on The Gray Tower trilogy (overall).

  • There was not enough differential between the three books to warrant anyone claiming they should be read together.  Reading Circadian Circle felt like I was reading The Tower’s Alchemist, only with less characters.  I just believe one is not missing anything crucial if one skips a book or just reads one book.
  • I know there is a propensity for good writing here.  The culmination of the action segments are extremely vivid, yet there is a dryness with the rest of the writing.
  • First person narrative was used with this whole trilogy, yet the main character did less than a stellar job with bringing me into her emotions.  For me Isabella lost this entire journey, there wasn’t anything that symbolized any type of break.  It was also difficult for me to really gauge what any of the other characters were like because Isabella’s depiction of people and events was so limiting.
  • Each book was trying to tackle on too much, especially The Tower’s Alchemist.  I didn’t know whether I was coming or going.
  • Too many characters were presented to the point where practically none of them stuck and I wondered and/or nearly forgot what purpose they served.  The major players lacked lucid descriptions and decisive maturation.
  • Dialogue didn’t ring natural, especially in The Tower’s Alchemist where the World War II setting was fully utilized as well as emphasized.
  • I also admit to not understanding why the books had to be set in World War II as opposed to any other historical time.  Why have a historical backdrop at all?  Also at war were the spy element and the magic element.  Quite honestly, I loved the magic element more and for me, reading about the spy information was a bit distracting.
  • Teachable (instructional) banter could have been discarded for the most part and aided to cut these lengthy books by about a third, yet the reader still would have known what the story was about.

To conclude, all I will say is this:

If you want to go on an emotional roller coaster ranging from confusion, shock, shaking your head, and all things in between, leading to a very eerie pounding in your head and heart, then by all means, go for it.

As for me, I’m glad to get off this ride.  I’ve never seen anything quite like this.  There are not enough Circles of Protection, mental locks, talismans, heart binds, and Zaman’s Fires to invest any further.

Closing all of the Rifts with my Add All Scores and Subtract by Number of Reviewers Circle:

4.54.5 out of 10

Overall, Circadian Circle receives 4.5 out of 10 TRB Stars.

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I have an appreciation for the unique, love for all types of art, and fierce attractions to brilliant intellectuals (from book smarts to street smarts). Lover of humanity but feel humans have lost their way, just trying to stay true to myself as conformity threatens to take me away. Simply one head, many crowns: Author. Reviewer. Columnist.

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